大臣 发表于 2010-11-12 18:53   全显示 1楼
我到是觉的就用郭强的口吻来写好一点,这样可以很好得描写角色的心里活动,男人有时不行只要不是器质性的病变,一般来说心里的因素很关键,可能小郭的老婆太强势,以直于"小小郭"不敢抬头建议楼主以郭强的口吻来写剧情,再搭配一个温婉,善解人意的人妻来一段缠绵的故事,让主角走一个雄起得过场,也给咱们老爷们提口气,最后再杀回雪涵的床上这个人妻的设定最好来个制服类的也好有点征服感,哈!哈
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